"Watching the river"My initial thoughts for this poem was too keep it simple and position it over looking the thames, this poem is very descriptive so ideally I wanted to let the poem do the talking. So in this design I kept it extremely simple with a classic header in georgia, a fairly knew typeface designed for the web but used just as well in print. I feel this is one of my weakest designs and will have to re-think my approach. I'm still confident or set on having it positioned over looking the thames so you can relate to the poems descriptions to the actual Thames. I used Georgia a simple type so that it wouldn't give you an impression of the thames as the poem creates that imagery in your head. Overall I think that this idea is weak, there really is no justification for the type and needs tinkering.
Interim Crit (feedback)
Change type or colour (not many fans of georgia)
Move header down consider scale and how it is going to be read.
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